Well i think the poem to me is that we the people are the robots and the government is running everything they make money while we are going into poverty the government does not care about they take away civil liberties and rights for want people died for, in america the people are so mad because there guns are being taking away form them and they have to do it because the government is saying that if you don't give your guns you are racist. their are two sides to everything in this case you have your government funding for banning guns all over the USA were as the NRA and others people want their guns because it says it in the consitution you have the right to bear arms and now I have to agree with the NRA because when you have guns you have a lower crime rate with no guns you have high rate of crime and they should have checks for people who are criminals and people who are mentally unstable. and the people who create things and say that they are stupid because they created something and yes you are probably against guns but it is suicide pills not guns. and it is proven by FBI that having more guns in a country is less crime and the thing that makes me so angry is that the police is taking guns away from kids who are just playing with toy guns, water guns,NERF guns,bb guns,and even the halo kitty ballon gun being taking away and then they arrested for that its just said and i can show you a lot more about this stuff and many more things about how the government is trying to make you poor and how the government is starting to have shooting targets as white people with guns and this is what i got from the poem the government is fucking us and I am not going to stand and take it because the people who are stupid and naive don't care.
And my most favorite the first tattoo i would get is one i really never thought about till neuf brought it up his tattoo of the prussian eagle cause he is from german background i would like the same thing as neuf but instead of the lion on the eagle i would have the ukranian symbol on the chest of the eagle or over the head of the eagle i would have a sword in one of its claws cause my family has been in all the world wars and in the other claw would be a iron cross showing honour and valour. my second tat would be of the german eagle during world war 2 and if i get kids i would have a tattoo of them on my calf.


this is the most disturbing thing in the world and kinda scary that this war has been going on for 63 years and now things are heating up on the korean pennisula and i think i picked a great genius hour
the korean war is mostly a forgotten war and one of the most craziest borders to ever have lived, most people focus on the middle east with iran and israel that probably most media because if iran attacked or america fought it would start world war 3 with nato all of europe north america and israel vs. iran russia and possibly china. and countries like india would have a hard time cause they would have to pick who they want to fight they are friends with both israel give them weapons were as iran gives them oil. besides that we have to be ready cause north korean is the most secret place in the world
Ryley you have definitely improved your attendance and I love your Genius Hour idea. You seem to have really turned a corner in your attitude to work and being on task in class as I can rarely think of a time when you are off task for extended periods. For you, the biggest improvement you can make is in your actual writing I think. You struggle with capitals and punctuation, which makes reading your ideas tougher on me and others. One of the best ways to learn to use proper grammar is actually to read more so I encourage you keep reading. I will point out the odd thing but we won't be doing grammar sheets, so when I mention to check your capitals, please do, and remember it's better than a whole booklet. :)
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